Sunday, November 06, 2005

Bad poetry alert!

Disclaimer: if reading free-verse stuff that I come up with on my long commute home doesn't appeal to you stop here. Otherwise, proceed at your own risk.

Reclamation

One foot-high stalk;
Green rising out of concrete.
Surrounded by glass, metal, smoke, smog and impatience.
Amidst the man-made ruin She shows her resiliance,
Her desire for reclamation.

3 comments:

Spike said...

that is certified spawnkitty poetry (see http://spawnkitty.blogspot.com/2005/04/spawnkitty-poetry.html)
Congratulations.

bite bite

Big PoZer said...

I quite like it.

Post more of your commute home free-verse.

The Bears said...

Oooooh! Good poem!

*much nodding of Bears*

Thanks for posting it.

OK Bye
Blinky